Factions: Raids of the Divided

I get the impression that the author was a rather young writer who was trying their best, but there's still lots they need to learn. The formatting was completely off. Different characters dialogue was all grouped together instead of separated into paragraphs, and the game would mention characters that I hadn't even met yet. I hope the author keeps writing, but I also hope they try to learn from the mistakes they made with this game.

The story is just a big no, the character is flat.

What the hell did I just read? Nothing about this made sense. The writing was near indecipherable. The plot was confusing and rushed. Who the hell am I playing? Why is everything so casual? All this information is dumped on you but the only things you get to know are the shallowest surface details. There is no depth at all, and the riddles are way too easy. And there is no emotional buildup or investment. Things just kind of... are