The Vampire House

I came away from this game very disappointed. I was actually getting invested in the characters and their growing relationships as well as the buildup between my protagonist and the villain only for the story to end in the most abrupt and premature way I think I've ever seen. The writing itself had a few typos and maybe grammar issues, but not enough to break immersion for me. Overall, feels very much like a story by a less experienced writer - not bad, but not good enough. Narrative blue balls.

I like the story and it gets pretty interesting with all the people you can spend time with. I find the awkward teen stuff such as suggesting someone dates someone or school gossip is pretty entertaining so keep that up! However.... I am pretty disappointed with the random ending as most people seem to be. It doesn't even make sense like it just ends without any conclusions for anything pretty much so please finish the story or make a book two that also has the ad option thank you👌!

Interesting story, but the endings were so abrupt and felt rushed. Id been really careful about building up my stats, which affect literally nothing, and making good choices for the characters and was hoping to have a satisfying ending to make up for the lack of story between the characters: but no. I'm really bummed. If the stats are implemented and the endings are extended this would be a great story.